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Cause and Effect of a Sucessful Basket Ball Team I attended Leveretts Chapel High School where I was a member of the basketball team Our basketball team made it to the area playoffs two years in a row Our team was successful because we had dedicated and talented players a dedicated coach and awesome fans The players on our team were extremely dedicated no one missed practice unless they had a doctors appointment or terribly sick So we didnt have to worry about who was going to show up and who wasnt we could always depend on each other to be there We also had an extremely talented team we had played together since sixth grade so we knew each others every move We didnt have just one or two players that were good we had five great players We were also not playing for our own benefit we were playing for the good of the team Opposing teams could contain one player but couldnt shut down the whole team Our team was extremely lucky to have a dedicated coach She was always there for us when we needed her rather it was as a coach or friend She wanted us to succeed and she sacrificed time with her family for our benefit As long as we wanted to stay after practice she would stay and help us no matter how late it was While other coaches wanted to practice just during the class period and the get home to their families or take care of personal business She also made sure that we were excelling in our class room work so that we would be successful later in life Last but not least we had awesome fans that supported our every move Most teams when they had an away game might have only one or two parents that attended the game but that was not our case It didnt matter where
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