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I chose the value of Youngness People often try to feel a lot younger in many different ways From cosmetics surgery pills fad diets technology and cars people try to slow down the aging process I chose to illustrate it this way because people especially women try all sorts of different things to enhance themselves when they are younger or make themselves younger when they are older For example plastic surgery women use breast enhancements liposuction nose jobs and all sorts of routines to make themselves more attractive The more people age especially in the United States they try to feel younger They try to be in or with the cool crowd Explain to me why you often see elder men driving around in tiny sports cars They want to feel younger they have a passion for it Hey they might but most of the times they are trying not to feel as old as they are And women on the other hand why are most of my friends mothers wearing the same clothes I wear Maybe they like it or they feel good because they used to wear it when they were our age and the styles are coming back Or is it simply because they are getting old and they realize it more and more each day Why do people like changing themselves Colored contacts make-up hairs dye all these different corrective surgeries What is wrong with us Nobody knows but the American Society holds it upon them that perfection is a necessity You dont see old women modeling old womens clothing Of course not Young women always do the trick Tanning salons beauty parlors personal trainers and personal shoppers Everyone has one these days I have my hair stylist my make up consultant and the Clinique counter my personal trainer at the gym and my shopper at the mall Again I ask why do people need all these things They need reassurance
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