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Walking down a crowded hall in a public school one can see something that is very important diversity Slowly but surely this privilege is being taken away Ever since President Clinton proposed mandatory uniforms there have been some major opinion clashes from both parents and students In the following paragraphs it will become very clear that school uniforms cause more problems than they solve Schools are always promoting diversity Enforcing dress codes such as uniforms proves them quite hypocritical Uniforms actually introduce conformity and communitarian group-think Who wants to be the same as the person next to them Not many people do Making uniforms mandatory takes the students right to express themselves and to be different Many students use their clothes as a way to tell people about themselves and to express the mood they are in Take away that and its like taking away one of their basic human rights Some say uniforms actually save money In reality uniforms usually are very costly Plus the parents must pay for a totally different wardrobe for their kids after school Its not like the students are going to wear their uniforms all day So in the end the parents actually end up paying a lot more when their children must wear uniforms Another reason people like the idea of uniforms is due to all of the school violence present today The people think that if kids all wear the same clothes that will reduce the violence between the students First of all the students will still know who is rich or poor skinny or fat etc The students will still be able to draw conclusions good or bad with or without the uniforms The uniforms only provide a temporary disguise Secondly the uniforms are only a quick-fix Instead of trying to solve the root of the problem they slap a uniform on it and diagnose it cured If the government really wanted to try to fix
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