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Have you ever experienced something you wanted to until it actually happened Well I have I was 11 years old when my life took a sharp turn I always wanted to come to United States of America to see my father but when I did having to go to Bear Lakes Middle School became a complete torture and it was a lot different than I thought On the first night when we arrived in USA my 13 years old brother at that time was rushed to the hospital The main purpose to come here was to save my brothers life All of this affected me in a lot of ways When my dad came home at 300 AM in the morning he told me that my brother was diagnosed with Leukemia I never ever thought that my brother would have to go through something so life threatening like cancer Tears still roll down my eyes when I think of that night Then the next morning my sister and I were admitted into Apollo Elementary School in Orlando Days weeks months and then a year went by when my brother was finally in remission the cancer was in a dormant state After a while we moved to West Palm Beach where I had my worst experience in Bear Lakes Middle School Boy is that a BAD memory Students in that school were plain boorish At that time I didnt know how to speak English very well so people used to make fun of me so much that I used to go home crying I learned a very good lesson there though Never be nice to someone whos mean to you because they will only take advantage of you Because of my school problems we moved again and I ended up going to HL Watkins Middle School where I found my best friend and things started to be a little better I experienced two wonderful years
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