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An Analysis of Margaret Sanger's The Children's Era Speech

This is an analytical essay in which the author delves into a speech made by Margaret Sanger. Sanger recited "The Children's Era" speech at the Sixth Neo-Malthusian and Birth Control Conference in New York. She advocated for legal abortion and available birth control so that children could live the best lives.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done a great job presenting a substantial amount of evidence to support your points about Sanger's speech on birth control. You start your essay off with an informative introduction that provides the necessary background information on the reason for the speech. The introduction does not appear to have a clear thesis statement, so consider adding a thesis to show the main point of the essay. There are a number of punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure errors that need to be resolved through proofreading or editing. Also, the essay lacks smooth transitions between different ideas presented in new paragraphs. Using transitional words and phrases to relate ideas together is important to the overall flow of the essay. Last, there are a number of facts presented in your essay that are not cited. Any time that you use information, numbers, or statistics that have been obtained from another source, it is important to cite them to avoid plagiarism issues."

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