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The music in the background buzzed through the dimly lit bar as Sharon gently caressed the smooth glass as she stared fuzzily into her fifth glass of whiskey It had not been her intention when she walked into the Crocodile to become tipsy it was more something that had just happened while she occupied her mind with other self- pitying things It was her first Christmas since her divorce and it didnt help that her daughter was spending it with her father and his new girlfriend It wasnt as if her marriage had been a happy one in the last few years nor had it ever been a good relationship She and her husband ex-husband were not fit right from the beginning and she had known it they had both known it so why did she let it go on for so long Why had she let herself bring a child into their loveless marriage Sharon picked up the glass and drank it back without pause She glanced over at the bartender signaling him to bring her another he gave her a glance that at first in her now drunken stupor seemed to say Stop bothering me you bitch but in fact and after a few minutes to gather herself enough to think straight was a look of concern and pity Do I really look that pathetic she wondered Of course you do you idiot youre a lonely woman sitting at a bar alone getting drunk on Christmas eve She missed her daughter she missed her old life as unhappy as it was and it bugged her that everyone around her was moving forward while she stayed inevitably still It would have been okay if she had been the one to
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