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Ever since I started to take an active interest in girls too much of an interest for my parents liking I was always looking for the one who I would have an instant link with and think about every hour I never really thought Id find her until after I was finished university but hey lightning strikes when it wants to As I was sitting my History 12 class I could feel someones eyes on me I looked to my right and there she was Her eyes were twinkling and her smile dazzled me As I returned the smile I noticed how extremely attractive she was Her clothes were nothing special at first glance just jeans and a T-shirt but the way she looked so confident in them she could have just stepped off of the cover of a fashion magazine Her hair pulled back into a ponytail and her eyes were an intense blue gray I knew I needed to focus on the notes that the teacher was writing on the board but her stellar smile had me frozen in place She turned her head back to the front and I assumed she had returned to her note taking but as I finally turned my attention back to the teachers notes I could feel her deep gaze upon me again When the class finally ended and I was making my way toward the exit she flashed me another one of her breathtaking smiles I was still thinking about her as she approached me in the hallway Our conversation started out with a simple Hi We continued talking as we walked out of the hallway and as we made our way to the concession and then time seemed to stop as we listened to one another tell of our future ambitions of university We didnt even have the slightest comprehension of the time that had passed until it the concession closed and by then
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