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I can still remember the first baseball game my dad took me to It was about ten years ago I was at a 4th of July party in the valley a heavily wooded area full of deer and other animals Its about a 10 minute drive from my house There was a river that cut out jagged cliffs small ponds and large marshes where the deer go to have a drink Every year we have a party there and everybody comes My whole family was there including my twin brother Mike Since we are fraternal twins we look nothing alike He is a portly boy with thick black hair He was wearing his favorite shirt a long sleeve number with a picture of Bugs Bunny My dad is a bald man with a fat stomach and thick bifocals He was dressed in the usual a Grey one-pocket t-shirt and a pair of really faded blue jeans He wears a pair of fat red suspenders and a belt at the same time for some odd reason I could only pray that I would not look like him when I grew up At one point during the games of horseshoes and softball my dad took Mike and I aside and gave us something in a plain white envelope When I asked what it was he opened it and showed us Since I lived in a large suburb of Cleveland I thought for sure I was going to see the bright lights large crowds and the mammoth brick structure people used to call Cleveland Municipal Stadium I was going to taste the spicy stadium mustard the Indians made famous I was going to smell the air that held an aroma of freshly roasted peanuts Cracker Jacks and Miller Light beer But to my amazement when he showed my brother and me the tickets I saw the word Akron-Canton written down in all silver letters I wondered what
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