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An Analysis of Paul's Suffering Tangerine by Edward Bloor

This essay gives a summary of Tangerine by Edward Bloor. The student argues that though the main character, Paul, suffers a great deal at the hands of his brother, that suffering makes him stronger as the story progresses.
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Bob's feedback:

"You have a lot of good material to work with here and it could be organized into a strong essay. However, information is given rapidly, without providing much context to help the reader understand. Consider trimming down the introduction so it gives more of an overall idea rather than specific plot points. The supporting paragraphs can outline the plot, but should be given in a logical order and with enough context that a reader who is unfamiliar with the book will be able to follow along. There is also a lot of repetition that could be trimmed down. Your thesis seems to center around the fact that Paul became stronger because of his brother's actions, despite those actions being malicious. If that is your focus, make sure your conclusion reinforces that idea and does not stray back to an analysis of Erik's character."

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