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An Analysis of Pearl in Hawthorne's "The Scarlet Letter"

This essay is about The Scarlet Letter written Nathaniel Hawthorne. The author focuses on Hester and Pearl's characters and the parallels between them.
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Jenn's feedback:

"This paper is off to an excellent start. You have a perfect handle on writing conventions, which is essential for reading comprehension. You also have done a great job formatting the paper. The only suggestion I have regarding this is to consider not indenting your headings and making them bold or italicized, so they stand out from the text. Only a little bit of effort needs to be put into the other aspects of the paper to improve it. While you have both an introduction and conclusion, your introduction does not end with a clear and concise thesis statement that aligns with the body of the paper. While the thesis statement you have right now suggests that the paper will focus on Pearl, the document's content does not reflect this. Because of this, it is not as straightforward as it should be what the purpose of your paper is, and it does not appear that you are focused on a goal throughout your writing."

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