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Prologue They were laughing at me again Not one day could go by where I could go to Shadyside High and not be laughed at by my peers Whether they were laughing at me for my shaggy fag haircut or how ultra poser-ish my clothes were I couldnt go a day at school without being laughed at But this time it wasnt the guys who normally laughed at me or even the group of popular girls that laughed at me usually everyday It was a girl and her friends that wasnt supposed to laugh at me Lunch was the worst period of the day for me Worse than gym class where the boys shoved me to the ground in basketball causing me to have to sit out because those guys larger then me nearly crushed me Lunch was worse than every subject It was because I was forced to sit at a table alone next to her table Of course that was how I first discovered her Many guys in our school noticed her though Im sure I wasnt the first one She was stunning--beautiful A natural beauty she didnt need to drench her face in make-up to look good She was medium height very thin pale with the most stunning crystal blue eyes I had ever seen and long silky dark brown hair that I just wanted to run my fingers through so badly On that day I noticed she wore ripped jeans a tight concert t-shirt and a pair of Converse High Tops She looked wonderful in anything she wore I had been watching her now since September back when I first found my lunch table There had been times when she had sat down at my table being the friendly girl that she was and she had started a conversation with me I being the painfully shy idiot that I am struggled through the conversation
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