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An Analysis of Shadrack's State of Mind in Sula by Toni Morrison

This is an analysis of the character Shadrack in the novel Sula by Toni Morrison. The student examines some of the events that the character witnessed while serving in World War I and the effects that those events have on the character's state of mind.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've done a good job of piquing the reader's interest in this novel, and your descriptions of some of the events that Shadrack lived through are vivid. However, it is unclear what the purpose of this essay is. Your introduction should be longer than one sentence, and it should identify specific points that your paper will examine.
Much of the paper is a retelling of the story with little analysis. What are your own thoughts on the characters, setting, and themes of the novel? What does Shadrack's state of mind mean in the context of the novel? Make sure to draw your own conclusions and let them be the focus of the essay. There are also many awkward sentences and grammatical mistakes that impact the readability of the essay. Consider working with an editor or peer reviewer to make sure your ideas are expressed clearly."

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