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An Analysis of "Shooting an Elephant" Written By George Orwell

This is an analytical essay in which the author analyzed "Shooting an Elephant" written by George Orwell. The author goes into detail about Orwell's opinion on imperialism and what he had to endure as a police officer in British occupied Moulmein, Burma.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You did a good job introducing the story to the audience to give context for your argument. Since you did not include a thesis statement in the introduction, the goal of your essay is not clear. Consider including a thesis statement that guides the rest of your writing. There few grammar and punctuation errors, showing that you have a good command of your writing. There are, however, some issues with the way that information is presented in your paper. The points that you are trying to make do not appear in a logical order. Because of a lack of logical transitions between different topics, it is unclear what many of the ideas have in common. You present a lot of direct quotes but have not included any citations. There is also some information that should appear in quotation marks but does not. To round out you paper you need to make sure to include a conclusion that summarizes the main points in the essay and reiterates your thesis statement."

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