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An Analysis of Social Media's Impact on Communication Skills

In this essay, the student makes the argument that social media is having a negative impact on people's ability to interact with one another, especially in person.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've touched on a lot of important points about the impact of social media in this essay and you've made a strong argument about the breakdown of communication skills due to this technology. However, many of the broad statements you've made have gone unsupported. There is also a fair amount of repetition that could be avoided by taking a close look at how the essay is organized. Make sure each paragraph has its own main idea that doesn't have too much overlap with others. Read through each paragraph to make sure you aren't repeating statements. Finally, the essay would benefit from some concrete examples of ways to combat the problem you've identified, rather than vague references to awareness and limiting social media interactions."

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