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I plan to play a lot of basketball this summer We will probably end up going to nationals in Orlando which would be a lot of fun I will lift a lot of weights to get stronger also Other than playing basketball I will be going to Oregon and visiting friends and family I should spend about 3 weeks there I will obviously work on my tan I plan to work on learning the bass guitar That should be a lot of fun because I have a lot of musical talent that I havent had the time to use I think that peer-pressure for me right now isnt bad at all I am not being pushed into drugs heavily or anything else that is illegal The pressure to perform well in basketball is high right now I am not liking that I feel that I will probably take a break from playing ball relatively soon Because of my peer-pressure in basketball I have not had much time to do school work It get frustrating when your teachers get mad at you for not doing your work when it really isnt your fault I think I have put lots of work into my school year I will stay up all night sometimes to do projects like I am doing right now Considering I have basketball school chores weights and friends to deal with I think that I am doing alright Some teachers just are never satisfied though I am excelling well in all of those categories Next year I will do a lot better in school though I need to come out of high school with about a 34 GPA I dont necessarily have a dream car There are many cars that interest me but none that out-weight the rest I am sufficient at time management skills I definitely could improve in that area but for all the things that I have
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