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An Analysis of the Black Panther Movie

This short analytical essay focuses on the Black Panther movie. The student gives a little background about the movie and briefly examines the theme, scenes, dialogue, and setting.
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This essay received a C by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Crystal's feedback:

"You nicely outline some broad points and background info about the Black Panther movie and touch on some good points to analyze the movie content--the theme, how the scenes are cut, the premise of Wakanda, etc.--and incorporate a few quotes to illustrate a point. However, the purpose of your essay is unclear. Are you giving an overview of the movie, or do you need to analyze certain parts of it? There's no clear intro and thesis statement to establish (and tell the reader) what you're going to write about and how the context is being framed. In addition, the details aren't organized around a broader purpose (at least not clearly at this point). The end also lacks finality. Finally, while you use great diction overall and use transitional elements well, there are quite a few sentence structure issues (sentence fragment at end of first paragraph, several run-on sentences) and comma errors. Cleaning those up with a solid edit and improving the structure, organization, and focus would better ensure the good points you highlight about the movie have a clear purpose and flow well."

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