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The Catcher in the Rye After I got home I had to start packing my stuff I was ready to in about 15 minutes because I didnt have much stuff to pack I am a fast packer I have always been a fast packer I remember when I was only 6 years old and I had to pack I just played around and forgot to pack When my mom got home and I hadnt even started packing she really got pissed We missed our plane that time So after that I have always been a fast packer I had this goddam old suitcase that I have had for the last 15 years I dont really like having new stuff after I get used to the old My mom just came into my room as I closed my suitcase Have you finished packing she asked Just like I would close my suitcase without finishing packing yet I answered politely yes to her and then we left the house We drove to airport in this old Volkswagen we have had for as long as I can remember My dad usually drives the car but this time he wasnt coming with us I t was only me my sister and my mom My mom really looks kind of funny when she drives No kidding she does With her head stretched out and all That really annoys me The one thing I like about my mom is that she doesnt care even though she looks funny My sister kept on changing the goddam radio stations all the time That also annoys me a lot My mom and sister were talking something about some new eye makeup or something like that I dont really give a censored about things like makeup Why do people put some colors in their face just to look nicer for other people I dont get that I really dont I was reading
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