Destruction of the Planet and the Possibility of Reform

This essay advocates for rapid action to halt the destruction of the planet.

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"It is supposition that humans desire to conquer and dominate the planet. How do you ascribe motivation? Similarly, you say without evidence that the air is unhealthy in most cities. Absent other guidance, you should include a serial comma in lists. We do not get our water “of” environments; we get it “from” them. You mention CO2 (which would benefit from writing the “2” as a subscript) and CFCs “who are around for centuries.” These are things, not people, so “who” does not apply to them. You finish page 1 with a comma splice, which is the use of a comma to separate what should be two sentences. As a modifier, “old growth” should be hyphenated; “rainforest” is one word, as is “groundwater.” You write “stagnate” instead of “stagnant.” You should run a grammar checker to improve your expression, and document your assertions."

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