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An Analysis of the Christmas Hallmark Movie "Winter Love Story"

This is an analytical essay about the Christmas Hallmark movie Winter Love Story. The author believes that it is the best of the Christmas Hallmark movies and discusses why. The author highlights how the film has an outstanding actor and actress (Kevin McGarry and Jen Lilly), a great storyline (two authors on a book tour), and lots of love sparks throughout. The author also communicated how they felt the movie was more realistic and relatable than most.
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Jenn's feedback:

"You have done an excellent job communicating the purpose of your essay and staying focused on that purpose throughout your writing. You have also done an excellent job of organizing your paper by including an introduction consisting of a thesis statement and a conclusion. I do suggest that you add a bit more detail to your thesis statement, though. Use the thesis statement as an opportunity to tell the readers what points you will be making. Overall, the content of your essay is good. I recommend that you try to reduce repetition, though. You tend to use the exact words, phrases, and ideas repeatedly. See if you can elaborate, reword, or add some new material. In general, you did an excellent job with the MLA formatting. I would review your in-text citations and your Works Cited Page for potential formatting and punctuation issues. Last, there are several word choice and punctuation errors scattered throughout the essay. The most noticeable is your use of words that should be hyphenated but are not."

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