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Equality Is Only a Concept In America We as American citizens are taught by the Declaration of Independence that All men are created equalIrish 748 is this the ideal opening sentence Through this ideal we infer that we each have an equal opportunity to live The American Dream by acquiring wealth and power by paying our dues and working hard P may want to excise Equal since the point of the paper is that there is no equality for American dream Unfortunately this is a myth The majority of Americas wealth is held by an elite upper class that exploits its workers and controls the government in order to protect and acquire more money for itself might want to break sentence up hereand because this elite is so unwilling to share its wealth it is unrealistic for most Americans to have dreams of gaining large amounts of money or power unless some radical changes many of which are ironically considered to be anti-American occur When discussing the huge differences between the wealthy and the rest of the population Marian Irish author of The Politics of American Democracy states that American federalism has had devisive and seperative tendencies144 This is very true in our society because individual goals are stressed instead of actions that would most benefit others Why Source Perhaps This is may not be the best way to start sentences Consequently those who are able to acquire large amounts of success through the business world must be extremely focused on these individual goalsPerhaps Would is better than Must here It is also in the best interest of them and their family to keep obtaining new wealth for future generationsFor is better than ofIt is in their interest to get as much work out of their work force while paying them as little as possible therefore making it extremely difficult almost impossiblefor members of the working class to become a member of this executive
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