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An Analysis of the Depiction of Women in Armenian Advertisements

This essay discusses how women are depicted in Armenian advertisements. The student notes Armenia's history of gender discrimination and notes that even after a cultural revolution, women are still heavily stereotyped in advertisements.
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Bob's feedback:

"This is an important subject, and you've provided some good information about it for your audience. However, there are a number of issues that make this essay problematic. Grammar mistakes, awkward sentences, and run-on sentences make the paper difficult to follow and should be addressed by a thorough edit. Under the heading "Brighter Future," you mention changes in the perceptions of Armenian women, but you don't comment on whether this has affected their depictions in media, and your conclusion seems to ignore this shift entirely. Make sure each paragraph has a specific topic and does not stray from it."

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