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Descriptive Narrative I remember that cold day in October three years ago as I walked down the endless rows of new and used cars I was oblivious to the sounds of the congested afternoon traffic around me All that was on my mind was anticipation a little hope and a checkbook in my pocket that seemed to weigh so heavy despite the lack of funds it represented It was only a matter of time before one of the salesmen would notice me wandering aimlessly through the car lot and eagerly approach me In the meantime I continued to inspect each car carefully I felt like a child in a toy store who wanted the most expensive toy but only had a handful of change I was lost in the moment when I heard Can I help you with something I had been waiting to hear those words for what seemed like an eternity and now I could finally get down to business As we shook hands the salesman introduced himself as David Burke He was a stocky guy with a firm handshake There was no sign of desperation in his eyes which was a relief Remembering what my dad told me I substituted his face with a vision of someone I hated most but his smile that went from ear to ear seemed to swallow and overpower that vision He asked me what I was interested in and I immediately led him in a beeline across the lot to the car that I desired I ignored the cries of the cars that I passed along the way and stopped at a white 1996 Acura Integra He was only briefly intrigued with the car that I had chosen before he asked how much money I was able to use as a down payment When I told him I only had eleven hundred dollars I could almost hear the mental laughter that was coming
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