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an in-class essay Prompt People compete against each other in many areas of life Are the effects of competition more negative than positive Explain your position Be sure to use specific reasons and examples from your own experiences or observations Competition is what life as we know it is based on Its whate keeps bacteria alive its what keeps humans alive The wold never would have gotten anywhere if it werent for competition It is not only positive its necessary For example lets go back to before the human race existed Dinosaurs - if one is a stronger species than another it is going to win in a fight The winner the stronger one is going to be the one getting the better food better living conditions the better mate Those are the things they are competeing for The winning dinosaur is now proven stronger his offspring will have the advantages he has It is survival of the fittest and competition is what makes it happen Without competition the world would go nowhere It is present today as much as it always has been just different Of course it can be seen in the animal kingdom but it affects the human population just as greatly IN order for our society to work we need weaker less competative people to be in it If the world were full of very competative people everyone would be at eachothers throats In fact the world probably would have been blown away by a power - hungry idiot or three If the world is full of non-competative people its ever going to progress Competative people are the ones making our society better trying to bring us better conditions in school to better mattresses on our beds So with the right balance of very competative people and less competative people competition is very positive and necessary in this world
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