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It was the summer of 98 and my friends had just graduated high school and we all decided to take a trip Where to go we all thought We were thinking where could we all have fun and not have any age requirements So Cancun was the place to be first thing I did when I got off the plane was transfer some money to some pesos When I tried to get pesos the cashier tried to rip me off but there was nothing I could do So I got my pesos and picked up a cervesa All I knew was how to say was Cervas por favor and apparently thats all I needed to have a good time The first night we were there we went to this place called Bolero and it was a dark very lively place There we meet this girl name Carla I had two words for her God Damn This bar we were at was no ordinary bar apparently Carla was the feature dancer of the evening I was thinking to myself Damn damn damn I am going to get into some trouble when I am down here The next day our other friends arrived from the states and we meet up with some girls so thats the last time we saw Carla We all got together that night at this club called Tequila Rock it was very trendy When we walked in all we smelt was smoke and beer which is not a bad thing because that is a scent of a good time Well we were having out fun and my friends girlfriend died on us she passed out from alcohol poisoning and we had to call the local ambulance but we got some Burger King fries and revived her so she didnt have to go to the hospital Apparently she hadnt eaten anything on the way down or all that day So the fries did
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