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The History and Use of Robots
This essay provides the history of robots and some principles of robotics.
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"You must pay attention to details. For example, you misspell “Czech,” leave no space after a colon, end a sentence with two periods, and end another with no period. You can catch such issues by proofreading your work, and you should run a grammar check as well. You say the term “robot” comes from Russia, but it was devised by a Czech, so it does not come from Russia. “Coining” is a common word, and there is no reason to place it inside quotation marks. Use single quotation marks only inside double quotation marks. Avoid arbitrary capitalization; only capitalize common nouns. The possessive form of “it” is “its.” You use a singular verb with a plural noun. I am not familiar with the revised laws, but the word “persevere” makes no sense in the fourth law. It is good practice to include a comma after the penultimate member of a list, and many formats require it.
You devote much of this brief essay to details such as types of motors, which are of little use to most readers. Similarly, the laws of robotics, and then their revision, do not warrant the space. You should instead provide more general information to give the reader a better idea of the types of robots and their uses, for example. You also need to add a conclusion.
When you prepare to write an essay, pretend you know nothing about the subject. What would give you the best understanding of it? That should be the content of the essay."
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