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A hole Just big enough for an adult male to swim through and make it to the other side gasping for air And it beckoned for my attempt I would have to hold my breath for at tops a minute and a half and once I was half way in there was no turning back About ten feet under water and twelve feet long this wonder of a tunnel had an eerie darkness to it and yet I had to do it I had to swim through it I took my breath and headed down As I pulled myself through the entrance I kicked my feet as hard as I could immediately thinking of the consequences to this mini self-contest I had started against myself Once around the rigid corner I could see a glimpse of light near the end of the tunnel It was beautiful like something you would have seen in a movie or a dream I finally made it and pushed myself up off the coral exit only to take in something I had lacked for the past minute and fifteen seconds It was the most exhilarating thing I had ever done Vacationing Hawaii was an exhilarating experience because it showed me all the beauty I had been missing in my life My first day at the big island otherwise known as Hawaii was catching up day My family and I had flown nearly twelve hours total to get there so naturally we wanted to sleep It felt great and while resting I began to think of all the cool things we were going to be doing for the next two weeks My family had always been talking about taking a trip to Hawaii but I never believed we would After our day of pure sleep we set out to take on our first trip into the main city the size of a town called Kona This city had one
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