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Perseverance to me is the determination in a person to not let anything or anyone stop you from obtaining a goal It is very important that everyone have perseverance because most people would not make it in life without it It gives you ethics and makes a more stronger and more respectable person out of you An unfortunate thing happened to a girl that I know Even though she had everything going for her which she did not know it that was her biggest obstacle She tried to fit in with people who were not even really her friends and people viewed her as a person I did not even recognize She had became pregnant and had to drop out of school That was another obstacle She became desperate and she felt like no one cared anything about her She thought this was the end of her world This is when her life took a sudden turn After telling her parents and them sitting through the shock thinking my daughter is pregnant things started to look up for her This person was more loved than she realized and other people began to see who this person really was She realized she had a small person living inside her that needed a happy life and future Not only that but she also needed to support herself with or without the father This person got married which seems to be working out pretty good She got her GED and is enrolled in classes at Tri-County She was able to buy a car and her and her new husband live in their own place Under the circumstances she still has a long way to go but she is determined and has a goal She wrote me a letter and apologized about everything and told me that she was very determined to make something out of herself and she is happy With a lot of help
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