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A Look at the Buddhist Meditation Process and its Benefits

This essay is about meditation. It explicitly discusses insight meditation and how it differs from other meditation. Insight meditation focuses on mindfulness and contemplating the body, feelings, mind-state, and mind-objects.
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Jenn's feedback:

"Overall, this is a very well-written paper. The paper's formatting is perfect, essential for cohesion and reading comprehension. I suggest that you make sure that there is no extra spacing between paragraphs, though. You have a good handle on writing conventions also. Very few punctuation, grammar, or sentence structure errors are found. You also did a fantastic job with the content. You did a great job helping the reader understand what insight meditation is. Regarding content, I recommend that you include some in-text citations to avoid potential plagiarism issues, though.

The most significant component of the paper that needs work is the organization. While you have an introduction, it does not end with a clear thesis statement. Instead, the thesis statement should communicate to the reader what the paper will be about and the main points you will cover regarding that topic. Then make sure that you include a conclusion that summarizes the main points you made in the body of the paper and relates them to the thesis statement. Working on the organization of the paper will also allow the purpose of your paper to be more clearly communicated and enable the reader to know that you remained focused on that purpose throughout your writing."

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