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The Lake It was the middle of springtime and across from my house where the incident took place There was a lake there in which my brother and I loved to explore from time to time The humidity and waterdrops where reminiscent of a fully functional sauna The onslaught of heat and burning glow of the sun was relentless Nonetheless this fact did not bother us one bit but gave us more incentive to dance with our cool and embracing long-lost love The first step of this operation was making sure that our neighbors had gone away from the house for at least two hours Since it was their lake and property this made it safe for us in not getting caught in the middle of our escapade Upon this my brother and I snuck to their backyard like two undercover police officers until we were in the clear Nerve-wracking minutes later flowed the emerald green and ever-so lively lake in front of us We stopped and starred in awe The lake had appeared so shiny and reflective it resembled a finely-cut diamond The rare and distinct fragrance enticed us It smelled like mother-nature herself with aromas ranging from wildlife and wet grass to evaporated swamp water and healthy dirt Then the time for us to find the desired vessel arrived We chose the kayaks and set out for the water Carefully with our torn-jeans rolled up and shirts off we dragged the massive thing over the slope of grass and mud into the shallow stream We then hopped aboard grabbed the paddles and floated and splashed into nowhere The wavy current sucked us downstream periodically bouncing us off of sandbags and sharp branches leaning over the water- Now that was true adventure Minutes later my brother and I after passing under many pipes and tunnels floated into a huge cul de sac of water with an island in the center In our amazement
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