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Unpoisoned minds are people who are safe in the care of others Safe in the group mind Safe from the poison of independence Safe from the poison of the truth of who they are or who they could be Safe from reality They are the manipulator the blind defender the denier Those so insecure their only method of raising their self-esteem a notch is finding someone submissive enough to take their petty abuses They are the cowards who when controlling someone weak feel strong Unpoisoned minds uphold the status quo of current times A status quo of insecurity and shallowness They think manipulation is something difficult theyve mastered rather than a crutch for a simple mind These are the fad-chasers the pseudo-weirds the pretend-evil people Though if they were fad-makers weird or evil they would stand out in a crowd these people fit perfectly into their crowd They are Team Players in crowds of one or more Their fashions - from dress to body piercing to tattooing are chosen according to what is currently frowned upon but done by enough people so they wont stand out Their weirdness is the same They are evil while evil is still the thing to be They are those who try to be offensive nasty funny in a classless manner If they make a vulgar joke and no one laughs they can say they offended the person They are too insecure for anything above bathroom humor They claim people are afraid of them when in truth people ignore or pity them Its scorn they claim People just cant handle me
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