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She has taught me to always try my best to treat everyone equally to not give up when things get hard She tells me to at all times be honest because in the end lies always hurt more She instills the importance of family and of doing well at school in me When I make decisions and she doesnt always agree with them she makes sure that I know that she is behind me all the way because she wants me to always be happy She has taught me right from wrong and the significance of self-respect She is my mother the greatest influence in my life Not only as a mom but also as a friend A time that is really prominent in my mind that I hope I will always remember is the year when I was doing poorly in English class and I wanted to drop it The easy way out as my mom called it She helped me realize that I was intelligent enough to be in the class that is why I was put in it and that I could do anything I put my mind to The talk with my mom helped me tremendously Not only because she gave me good advice but because she was talking to me like a friend would being understanding of where I was coming from and about my feelings Once when I was at a party with some close friends a really good-looking girl I didnt know came over to me Hey whats your name Would you like to come smoke a cigarette with me The first thing that popped into my mind was how my mom always taught me never to smoke because it is bad and could cause serious health problems After I remembered that no thank you was quickly spoken out of my mouth I was kind of afraid that the girl wouldnt talk to me after that but
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