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Religion in Ancient Greece

This paper relates the role of religion in ancient Greece.
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Jim's feedback:

"Many formats call for “second” rather than “2nd,” and “B.C.” should include no space. Notice that you misspell “through” as “though.” Toward the end, your sentence, “Greeks and priest …,” is confusing. First of all, “priest” should be plural. Assuming the priests were Greek, “Greeks and priests” is confusing. You might say, “Priests and ordinary Greeks,” for example. Then you write, “this oracles,” which is also confusing. This could be corrected by writing “these” instead of “this.” Your introduction is good, but the conclusion falls flat. I suggest deleting the last sentence and fleshing out the concept introduced in the first sentence."

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