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The sun rose early that day Edmond woke up and looked straight at the ceiling for a few minutes Then suddenly he pulled his covers off and ran to get dressed The king had called for him and he couldnt be late He brushed his teeth with Colgate put on his best clothing and sprayed on some Tommy cologne Everything had to be just perfect Edmond went into his kitchen and made himself a bagel to go He put on his Nike Airs and sprinted out the door with the bagel in his hand While running he took two bites out of the bagel and threw the rest towards a bird The palace was coming closer Edmond slowed down and wiped his mouth with his sleeve He started walking calmly like a gentleman This could be the moment that he was waiting for all of his life Edmond was a single 26-year-old man with a good heart He had hazel eyes and dark brown hair on pale skin He was almost six feet tall and was built in other words a fine guy He worked as an architect when he was not busy playing a role of a soldier of the kingdom Edmond had a dream he wanted to be successful famous wealthy and be his own boss In order to be recognized in the community Edmond worked hard on each and every assignment he did Each time building more bricks of reputation After many years of hard work he was invited to the palace to meet with the king Edmond passed the guard check and entered the palace He was asked to sit in the guestroom where the king would come and meet with him King Raptor entered the room slowly and majestically Edmond immediately stood up Sit said the king in a soft voice King Raptor was wearing a long red robe His crown shimmered in the light The king
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