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When I walk in the doors of a department store the first thing I notice is not the store but actually myself Because of the stress it takes simply to prepare for such an event I cannot even bring myself to enter a mall on some days Shopping is a rigorous task but the hardest part is not the actual shopping but the pre-shopping that wares the average person out When I plan to go shopping I must find the energy to flip through my cluttered phonebook to find someone with the same stamina Then once a partner is found I have to take a quick shower doing only the bare minimum to achieve the fastest time to get in and out Often I try to do multiple tasks while in the shower trying to lather my hair while balancing on one leg shaving is one I have conquered I have the scars to prove it My mind is busy worrying about what I will wear as the partially warm water washes over my hair to my toes Racing through the routine I finally get out planning to get dressed Then comes the actually getting dressed that takes the most out of me The only reason I am going shopping is to find something to wear depressing my mood to find a temporary outfit The cluttered closet with only partially hung items is enough to rethink the whole going out idea There are the drawers of the last season clothes that will not do The colors that I do not know what I was thinking when I bought them The favorite clothes that I managed to stain Or the finally comfortable dress that now has a hole in it There are the items grandmother knitted that wont see the light of day especially since I have no clue what they actually are supposed to be worn on And always the pants you wish you
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