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I was across the street baby-sitting for my neighbor I had to come home because my mother wanted me to do the dishes before I started babysitting As I finished the dishes my mother started yelling at me for taking to long to walk across the street to do the dishes Then I went back across the street and watched the kids for a few hours My mother told me when I got done babysitting that we would go shopping at the mall I was so excited that when I got done babysitting I ran out of the house so fast that when I reached the bottom step I fell so hard that I broke my ankle I landed with my foot flat on its side and my leg went straight up All I could hear was a crack crack crack really fast going up all through my body Then I felt myself start to black out When I first broke it I didnt feel a thing It started to hurt a few seconds later As I stood up I heard it crack some more as it straightened out I stood up and I walked back up the stairs and when I got to the door I forgot that I locked it as I walked out I had to walk back down the stairs I had to walk all the way around the house to the backyard where everybody was I walked up the stairs to the deck it was the most excruciating pain walking up those three steps I said to patty I really hurt my ankle can I have some ice I sat down at the kitchen table and tried to take off may shoe but my foot was so swollen that I could not get the shoe off and I had to cut the laces Then I used the phone to cal my dad over He came over as patty came to
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