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Ever since I was a little girl Ive longed for only one thing and that was to be free My ultimate goal in life was to get away from my parents If only I could get away from my parents Id be free Well after 24 years of torture I felt I moved out of my parents house and vindication was mine I remember thinking to myself that I could finally be happy I immediately befriended several cool people which led to my frequenting numerous night clubs parties and social gatherings in the city of Detroit It didnt matter the place if people were there so was I After being out there for about two years or so I started to notice something strange Although all of my friends and I were having major fun all the time we were all still quite miserable in our lives One friend had problems in her marriage another couldnt find the right job and another had health issues My problem - although I was now away from my parents I was still seeking freedom This search continued for many years until I found Christ There are at least two general factors which limit or define freedom One we might call the rules of the game and the other is our nature For example a gymnast is able to pull off the perfect standing back tuck flip because he knows the rules of the game In other words he knows the correct stance and form he should maintain to do so He knows the exact position his feet should be in and just how straight his back should be when he stands He might want the freedom to relax immediately out of the flip but he would never win a medal or trophy that way Similarly as part of Gods universe we need to operate according to the rules of the game in order to live right
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