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It was nearing the end of my junior year and school had let out for the day Around me the air seemed to crackle with more energy and excitement I had felt in along time Easter was upon us and in its arrival left us with a three day weekend The excitement was for Easter vacation The energy in the air was a sign of the fun and danger my friends and I would experience later in the middle of the dreery night To start our three day weekend a couple of my close girlfriends and I decided to escape from the loud obnoxious boys This led us to having a well deserved girls night out A girls night to us meant a movie pizza and lots of chit-chat The movie we laughed through was Jury Duty and afterwards we crossed the street to Pizza Hut for the delicious mouth-watering pepperoni pizza We ordered pizza close to 9 PM and left around 1130 PM The night took a sharp turn from our original plans when we stumbled into the presence of the boys we were trying to avoid With nothing better to do at 1130 PM on a Friday night all of us even the boys climbed into two vehicles and ventured out into the wide open country to play a harmless game of Cat and Mouse Taking after the name one car leads and tries desperately to lose the one behind it The second car tries to keep up by going at high speeds No one knew that our decision to play one fun game would turn into a disaster Bumping along on a country road and going over 80 mph was fun We laughed and shouted over the blaring radio We were the Cat chasing the Mouse All of a sudden we sped over a steep hill and before us sat the car we were after It wasnt moving The whole
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