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Winning the surfing competition meant a lot to Katie Although she had been surfing for a long time she had never experienced being in real competition She knew that succeeding in such a challenge required an immense amount of bravery confidence and hard work When the colorful banner that announced the surfing competition was first held in school it caught her eye Participating in such an event would be a great opportunity to prove to herself that she had what it takes to be a winner She knew though that winning the trophy wouldnt be easy Her arch rival Michelle Williams was running against her As much as she didnt want to admit it Michelle was the best surfer in town Katie knew that she had to work hard and practice continuously in order to succeed One early Sunday morning Katie went to the beach to get a head start on her practicing When she arrived she saw a familiar face It was Michelle As Katie approached Michelle gave her an utter look of disdain and said snootily What are you doing here Well its a public beach Michelle I dont believe you own it replied Katie with a tone of sarcasm in her voice What I meant was why are you even bothering to practice We both know Im going to win Michelle boasted Whats wrong Michelle cant handle a little competition challenged Katie Michelle laughed carelessly and said If competition is what you want then competition is what youll get This incident made Katie even more determined The power of Michelles harsh words drove Katie to engage in vigorous practice all week long She had three weeks until the competition and she would have to consume all her time
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