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This story is about how a young kid named Zackie who found an old type writer in an antique store when he went on the shelf and touched the type writer he felt dizzy After a few minutes later he fainted and he began to see black and white colors When he got up he heard a noise and he said to himself somebody is coming He left the type writer on the floor and he hid behind the desk The person was a woman who owned the store She yelled anybody here with her flashlight aiming at the desk Then she went behind the desk and she saw Zackie She asked him what you are doing here Zackie replied I have seen this type writer from the door and I like to type scary stories So then he asked the lady can he keep it she said yes Next he had to carry it home When he got home his dad said what is that He said it is a typewriter to type my scary stories When he went to his room he put the type writer down Then he wrote a story called THE BLOB WHO ATE EVERY ONE on a piece of paper for his first draft When he was done he proof read it and when he typed it there was a kid named Zackie home by him self It really happened So he said he heard the TV on but his dad was not there So he shuts off the TV Then he screamed mom and dad But no one replied back to him So he looked out side the window and both of his parents cars were there So he said they must have gone to Alexs house So when he typed it was dark and stormy that night it started to rain and thunderstorm He wrote that there was a Blob monster living in the basement Then he
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