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This story was good because of the suspense the man has when he doesnt know what is going on with his wife After his wife heard what happened to her family being sent to prison she got really nervous But I think the moral of the story is that when something critical happens you are never the same and you change For the experience that Teresa had just experienced she was a changed women She had been working all night and day to get her family out of prison and to get them a more comfortable cell or little things like that She learned what it was like to work really hard Her husband felt the affects of her loss and was very confused by what had happened to her I think he was just really shocked and amazed that this happened to her the one girl he would have never suspected to go off and be so committed to working and leaving him for it Where are you going Where have you been This is a freaky story in the first place This guy following this little girl named Connie who thought she was the prettiest thing tells him to join her to go somewhere I think when he says he will bring her somewhere and hold her really tight and she wouldnt have to worry about anything anymore meant that he would strangle her to death as she and him went off to wherever I can only guess that this guy is a demon of some sort and is able to sense her mind and know what she will do He knew exactly what her parents were up too at the barbecue and he was just so freaky What confuses me is when she picked up the phone I dont know what the hell was going on in her mind why didnt she call the police How could this guy have
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