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An Analysis of William Bradford's Style in Of Plymouth Plantation

This essay analyzes William Bradford's writing style in Of Plymouth Plantation. The student explores Bradford's word choices and explains the significance of the author's descriptions and point of view.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've touched on some important insights about Bradford's writing style and included some strong examples to illustrate your statements about it. However, this essay feels incomplete and could use some further development. The intro paragraph is a single run-on sentence (that cuts off mid-thought) and should be broken down into separate complete sentences. You mention that Bradford's style attempts to show the will of God, but there is no direct connection drawn to the text. It would be a good idea to expand on why certain word choices are "negative" and what purpose that negativity serves. Be careful about jumping between present and past tense, and consider having the essay proofread for grammar and punctuation errors before submitting. Finally, make sure to put together a strong conclusion that reinforces your main idea."

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