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An Analysis of William Shakespeare's Effect on Contemporary Theater

This analysis essay details the history of William Shakespeare and his contributions to theater and literature.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Kayla's feedback:

"Overall, I think you have a great start to this essay! I really think you highlighted the various parts of Shakespeare's life quite well. However, one of the areas that I think you could improve on is the thesis. You have the beginnings of a good thesis, but the follow-through in the essay isn't there. A thesis is, in essence, a roadmap to your essay. It tells your readers where you are going to go. Make sure that your paragraphs line up with what you talk about in your thesis. Also make sure that your essay answers the prompt that you are given. If you are focusing on Shakespeare's contributions to contemporary theater, make sure you spent the bulk of your paper discussing that. If you don't, it ends up being a rather unsatisfying paper, because it leaves your reader with questions. Your conclusion is also a little bit rough. There shouldn't be any new information in the conclusion, but rather, it should be a satisfying wrap-up and restatement of the main points. I can definitely tell that you know a lot about Shakespeare though! With a few edits and a little proofreading, this will be good to go!"

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