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An Annotated Bibliography of Publications on Second-Language Learning

This is an annotated bibliography of publications on second-language learning.
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Julie's feedback:

"Your rough draft is off to a good start, but it needs some work to improve the score. First, your references do not follow APA formatting. An APA reference for a book is: Author, A. A. (Date). Title of book. Publisher Name. DOI or URL.

Your first reference would be:
Alonso, A. R. (2018). Speaking in a second language. John Benjamins Publishing Company. URL.

According to APA 7, "for a series of conceptually related titles, the series title is not included." Also, the publishing location is no longer required in APA 7. The title of a book or article is given in sentence case (only the first word and proper nouns capitalized).

In terms of the content, each annotation should be written in full sentences, not sentence fragments. Some of your annotations lack detail necessary for clarity; for instance, in your first sentence, what does "importance" refer to? I would also recommend that you avoid second-person references ("you") in academic writing."

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