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An Annotated Bibliography on Public Transit

This is an annotated bibliography on the topic of public transit projects. The student lists several sources related to public transit in Shanghai and Australia.
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Bob's feedback:

"You've presented the information about your sources with a strong, formal tone. You seem to have hit all the important points about each source. However, the lengthy run-on sentences and some awkward word choices make it difficult to read, especially in the first paragraph. Take a close look at your transitions to make sure one sentence flows into the next and don't try to cram too much information into a single sentence. Consider having the paper proofread to address readability issues and flow. These issues seem to diminish as the bibliography progresses. Take a look at how well your final paragraph flows well from topic to topic and uses shorter sentences. Consider applying that same style to earlier paragraphs."

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