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I am writing to apply to become a senior prefect as I believe I would be an ideal representative of the school and a good role model to those younger than me I recently proved myself to be a good leader in the Careers in Construction challenge when I took charge of my group which then went on to win one of the prizes I would work well with other prefects as I have always been a keen team worker I was a regular member of the schools rugby team and I also play in the school wind band as well as the Peterborough County Youth Orchestra I was part of the John Lewis group in the Industry Challenge Competition as well John Lewis were so pleased with our performance they sent a letter to the school to say so On top of all that I one of the students taking part in the Engineering Education Scheme All of these things also show my commitment to extra-curricular activities I am a hard worker and proved this by achieving good grades in my GCSE exams and The school needs to promote the importance of extra-curricular activities as they can prove to be a valuable asset to those looking to prove themselves as committed workers after leaving school A good idea would be to give each pupil a compulsory activity maybe temporarily that also compliments their schoolwork A similar idea proved successful in the Industry Challenge Competition Please consider my application as I believe I fulfil all the criteria for a good senior prefect My referee is Mr Wears
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