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An Argument Against Animal Testing: Why Its Inhumane and Cruel

In this argumentative essay, the student looks at the topic of animal testing. Citing the inhumane treatment of the animal subjects and the discussion surrounding whether animals feel as humans do, the student argues that animal testing is tantamount to animal cruelty.
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Natalie's feedback:

"Animal testing is a very interesting topic! You did a good job of keeping the writing focused, you provided quotations from outside sources, and the formatting stayed consistent. The introduction and conclusion were a bit brief, so I would recommend expanding on those some more. The biggest area needing some editing would be grammar and spelling. There were several areas where you used a word or phrase that did not quite make sense (i.e. "We cannot rein up this kin of cruelty"), so be sure to use the right language to really get your point across. The best way to ensure that your writing flows well and makes sense is by reading it out loud to yourself and/or having someone else read it to see if it's understandable. Correcting this mistake alone would improve the quality of the essay substantially. You are on the right track, you just need some adjustments here and there!"

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