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Looking Back I made many mistakes growing up Some were harmless some were more serious which helped me to mature The one that has had the biggest impact not only on my life but the lives of others nearly took my life On my eighteenth birthday some of my friends decided to take me out to have a good time I was what they called a goody-goody I never really got in trouble They decided to buy some alcohol Alcohol I was surprised but so worried about what others thought that I agreed even though my instincts and heart said No Id always listened to my parents teachers and the media explain how alcohol and drugs are bad for you I knew the consequences but I wanted to be like everyone else and fit in So I took my first drink I drank almost half a bottle of vodka and by then it was like water to me I could not feel it burn my insides or even taste it I felt so weird It was a feeling I had never had before I drank half a bottle of gin straight By then I was so messed up I could not even say my own name We hung out for a while and then decided to come back to home I could not walk straight and my body was very weak Searching for our friends I fell down stairs causing bruises and scratches I remember my friend was getting mad because I could not walk straight or talk without stuttering I collapsed and became unconscious I did not get up that time My friend started yelling for someone to call 911
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