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An Argument Against School Uniforms

In this persuasive essay, the student argues against uniforms in school. Specifically, the student posits that uniforms limit creativity, are inconvenient, and have not been proven to increase academic success.
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Whitney's feedback:

"You did a great job laying out your three arguments against school uniforms and structuring your paragraphs to talk about each of these arguments in turn! You could strengthen this paper significantly by adding more details and support for each of your arguments. For example, you say that it's good for kids to learn about fashion -- why is it good? And why could uniforms lead to students becoming more insecure as adults? Elaborating more on these points will definitely help you make a stronger argument. It would also be helpful to add specifics from the sources that you researched - for instance, when you talk about how uniforms don't improve academic success, you say that that idea has been proven false, but you don't give any information about who proved it false or what their results showed. This is a great start overall -- with a little bit more information, you're on your way to an "A" paper!"

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