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An Argument Against the Claim That Veganism is Eco-Friendly

This argumentative essay puts forth the claim that veganism can be more harmful to the environment than omnivorous eating habits. It points out the negative effects of plant farming on local economies and ecologies.
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Bob's feedback:

"The points you raise about veganism's negative impact on the environment are important ones to consider, and you present the information well. However, your strongest argument seems to be the contrast between grazing and plant farming in Australia. Since you mention that this problem may be somewhat unique to Australia, it should not be extrapolated to the rest of the world. Be careful about making unsupported and broad claims such as the line about people having become "indoctrinated" in your intro paragraph. Such broad statements can undermine your credibility. Consider revising your introduction to avoid appearing dismissive or even contemptuous of the counter-argument."

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