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An Argument for a Mask Mandate in Texas During the Coronavirus Pandemic

This essay argues that a mask mandate is necessary in Texas due to the COVID-19 pandemic. The student points out that the public wearing masks will have a chain reaction of positive effects on the economy.
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This essay received a B by one of Kibin's paper graders. Click here to see what was done well and what needs improvement.

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Bob's feedback:

"You've nailed down the main reasons for wearing masks in public during the pandemic. With some reworking, this will be a strong paper. Your three supporting paragraphs are prevented as three separate reasons that masks should be worn. However, your first paragraph addresses stopping the spread of COVID-19, and the following points build on that. Rather than presenting these as three separate points, show that stopping the spread of the disease will cause workers to be able to continue their jobs, and that this in turn will cause the economy to rebound. Finally, there are some syntax mistakes and awkward wording that make the paper difficult to follow. Consider having it proofread to improve readability."

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